Yes, that timing works on my side, and Tuesday would probably be smoother because the room by the window is usually quieter.
If you want, I can bring the printed outline so we can mark changes by hand instead of trying to do everything on a screen.
Also, the third section still reads a little too formal to me, so I would trim it down and keep the opening simpler.
Let me know if noon feels better than ten.
If you want, I can bring the printed outline so we can mark changes by hand instead of trying to do everything on a screen.
Also, the third section still reads a little too formal to me, so I would trim it down and keep the opening simpler.
Let me know if noon feels better than ten.
I looked over the draft again, and the second page is much easier to follow after the revisions you sent.
I would still move the schedule notes closer to the top because people usually ask about timing before anything else.
If you are handling snacks, I can bring cups and the larger notepad from the cabinet.
Also, Sam said he can join for the first half hour, so we should keep the points short and in order.
That should make the discussion smoother.
I would still move the schedule notes closer to the top because people usually ask about timing before anything else.
If you are handling snacks, I can bring cups and the larger notepad from the cabinet.
Also, Sam said he can join for the first half hour, so we should keep the points short and in order.
That should make the discussion smoother.
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