Yes, Monday works better for me because the room should be quieter by then.
I can bring the printed notes, and you can handle the schedule update if that still makes sense.
About lunch, I think a soup and sandwich place would keep things simple for everyone.
If you want, send me the final headcount later this afternoon.
I also checked the side entrance, and it should be easier for Nora if she comes in after ten.
Let me know whether we should keep the short agenda or add the other topic.
I can bring the printed notes, and you can handle the schedule update if that still makes sense.
About lunch, I think a soup and sandwich place would keep things simple for everyone.
If you want, send me the final headcount later this afternoon.
I also checked the side entrance, and it should be easier for Nora if she comes in after ten.
Let me know whether we should keep the short agenda or add the other topic.
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I looked over the outline you sent, and I think the middle section needs a clearer transition.
You asked whether the afternoon slot is better, and I agree because it gives everyone time to settle in first.
For the handout, keep the shorter version since it reads more smoothly.
I can revise the opening paragraph tonight and send it back before breakfast.
If Maya joins, we should add ten minutes for questions because she usually has helpful edits on wording and sequence.
Let me know if you want me to check the map too.
You asked whether the afternoon slot is better, and I agree because it gives everyone time to settle in first.
For the handout, keep the shorter version since it reads more smoothly.
I can revise the opening paragraph tonight and send it back before breakfast.
If Maya joins, we should add ten minutes for questions because she usually has helpful edits on wording and sequence.
Let me know if you want me to check the map too.
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